What do I want with love?
What do I want with love?To feel the elation,Hearts exclamation toHeavens so high,Just to plunge from its graceIn total distaste,Never brokenYet shattered inside.What do I want with love?To live with...
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you are absolutely correct. i love this poem it uses wonderful metaphor.
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so very true, lady ostara ... to open ourselves to love is to open ourselves to the deepest of pains ... shattered hearts and withered souls ... and yet ... what choice do we have? a fantastically...
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This is a superb piece...love the way you start each verse, and the way the poem develops...a sad and melancholy subject, but handled perfectly...and yet...the answer is in the first few lines...if...
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This is a wonderfully constructed poem, with the start of each stanza reinforcing the theme of the message. A very nice job of writing here! I enjoyed this tremendously. Cheers! HarryYa'll are invited...
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Your poem is beautiful. It flows well for me, and I can completely relate to the emotions in this. The images you paint are so beautifully tragic. It really speaks the pain experienced by many broken...
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What do I want with love?I want naught, the price is too great.The cost too high,My time too late.Battle lost, I wait to dieGiving my heart as token,Never brokenYet shattered inside.I say, don't give...
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great work! And a much asked question!you've really done well with this one! *hugs*
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Thank you all for your kind comments. I never expected so many at once - again - thank you so much - I am glad you all liked the poem and bluedrm.......too late - already gave up. Sorry.~Lady Ostara
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It is a beautiful poem, but I think we are all looking for love and acceptance. I doubt that a true love is all this painful, we just end up kissing alot of warty toads along the way. Love should be...
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And if we don't open ourselves up to love, we won't be hurt, but we miss the joy of it as well. What's that Garth Brooks song? I'd Have Missed the Dance, or something? Something about even if we know...
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Exellent work!! The first four stanzas really hit home for me - shattered, sorrows frown, not letting go, yes I could relate to this very much. Thank You for sharing. Unique.
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Try to avoid itThis cannot beLove will returnFor all to seeWe think we choseTo go on aloneLove finds a wayInto every home..A melencholy piece...wonderful.Better a sinner than a hypocrite - Stephen King
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Wow...amazing piece, love the metaphors and the descriptions of love...wonderful JessicaIt's not easy to hide, all this damage inside, and I'll carry it with me until I'm not alive...when you look at...
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Again I have been away to long and let the post run away a bit. thank you all for your kind comments.~Lady Ostara
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Your poetic voice is refreshing in this writing,,,Patricia**See Patricias' Passions Forum At Poetry lovers**~Love stood still, imprinting your essence on my memory~If You Want More Quotes, Click Here!
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Thank you Patricia and Tim, I am pleased that you both liked it.~Lady Ostara
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